Nice illustration of the improvement Chris.
In tinkering around with reception of LowFER beacons and 630 m activity, I have found similar measures very helpful. The outdoor long-wire is transformer coupled at the feed-point, which also has a ground rod. Only the antenna side winding of the transformer is connected to the rod. The winding connected to the coax is "floating"
At the receiver end, I have another isolating transformer that can be inserted into the feeder. Not exactly a CM choke as such, but the intention is the same, add a high impedance for common modes. It seems to help a lot.
Touching the shield of the incoming coax to the centre conductor of the radio provides a very convincing demonstration that these measures are effective.
Ed